Hướng dẫn làm bài ĐỀ THI IELTS 27/06/2019

Report Plan:

• Paraphrase paragraph: shows>illustrates; three types>three different categories; between 1997 and 2012>from 1997 to 2012
• Overview/summary paragraph: (1) the highest number of visitors were adults (2) the number of visitors under 15 declined
• Paragraph 3: report figures and trend for adult visitors
• Paragraph 4: contrast lower figures for other types.  Report figures and trend for visitors under 15
• Paragraph 5: report figures and contrast trend for visitors to special exhibitions

Essay Plan:

• Introduction: refer to the task question.  My opinion: children need not grow up to be criminals.
• Paragraph 2: no firm link between criminal behavior and human nature.  Other influences on children: parents’ behavior and social conditions where they live
• Paragraph 3: children can be deterred from becoming criminals (1) use ex-prisoners to give talks in schools (e.g. the UK) (2) all adults must provide good role models for children – negative effects of consumer culture
• Conclusion: no link established between human nature and criminal behavior – it is possible to deter children from becoming criminals.