Hướng dẫn làm bài ĐỀ THI IELTS 28/03/2019
Report Plan:
- Paraphrase paragraph: show>compare; today>the present
- Overview/summary paragraph: (1) new surf clubs and a restaurant (2) the road now goes to the lighthouse.
- Paragraph 3: the top part of the maps: (1) changes to the car parks (2) the road extended
- Paragraph 4: the bottom part of the maps – the beachfront: (1) changes to the pools (2) the new surf clubs and restaurant.
Essay Plan:
- Introduction: refer to the task question; state opinion – agree that advertising pressurises children
- Paragraph 2: view 1 – companies simply provide useful information about products – for example, advertising new products on the market. In this way, children learn the skill of making consumer choices
- Paragraph 3: view 2 – (1) children are too young to make informed choices , they are easily influenced by marketing, and pressured into wanting what their friends have (2) childhood is a time to enjoy play and adventure, not to be trained to be consumers
- Conclusion: advertising puts too much pressure on children and has no useful purpose in their development.