Hướng dẫn làm bài ĐỀ THI IELTS 22/08/2020
Report Plan:
- Paraphrase paragraph: gives information about>compares; male and female>men and women; 1993 and 2003>in two different years
- Overview/summary paragraph: (1) services/transport and agriculture had the highest % of men and women in the workforce in 2003 (2) figures for men and women working in business rose dramatically
- Paragraph 3: select, report and compare figures for men and women in services/transport and agriculture
- Paragraph 4: select, report and compare figures for men and women (1) in business (2) in the other 3 sectors. Contrast trends.
Essay Plan:
- Introduction: refer to the task question. My opinion: sponsorship has more drawbacks than benefits
- Paragraph 2: arguments for sponsorship (1) it brings more more for sport , increasing popularity and public interest – eg. cycling (2) sports stars can be paid more and achieve higher standards (3) businesses benefit by linking their product to a healthy and popular activity
- Paragraph 3: arguments against sponsorship (1) companies are not interested in promoting sport, only to make profits – merchandising is not always connected even to the sport eg. Liverpool FC (2) money has corrupted sport – bribery, drugs (3) sports stars eg. Ronaldo live like millionaires
- Conclusion: sponsorship has destroyed the ideals of fun and fair play in sport