Hướng dẫn làm bài ĐỀ THI IELTS 20/03/2021
Report Plan:
- Paraphrase paragraph: percentage>proportion; living>resident; (add the years)
- Overview/summary paragraph: (1) the % of people born in the UK fell, but (2) the % of people born in Asia increased
- Paragraph 3: select, report and compare figures and trends over the period for people born in the UK, Asia and other regions
- Paragraph 4: select, report and compare figures and trends for the people from these groups as a % of the total Australian population.
Essay Plan:
- Introduction: refer to the task question. There are some reasons and the effects are harmful
- Paragraph 2: reasons. (1) people work longer hours because they do not want to lose their jobs (2) it is harder to earn enough money to live, so people work longer. Wages don’t increase (eg. the USA), but prices increased
- Paragraph 3: effects. (1) health – dnagers in the workplace and physical/mental fatigue (2) family life – less time spent with children makes it harder to have close family relationships
- Conclusion: there are some clear reasons to explain this trend, but the effects are damaging