Hướng dẫn làm bài ĐỀ THI IELTS 14/09/2019

Report Plan:

• Paraphrase paragraph: shows>illustrates; the unemployment rate>the % of people unemployed; leaving Ireland>who left Ireland
• Overview/summary paragraph: (1) the unemployment rate fell (2) the number of people leaving Ireland fluctuated
• Paragraph 3: the unemployment rate – report trends and select relevant figures (e.g. the highest and lowest points)
• Paragraph 4: the numbers of people leaving Ireland – report on the fluctuations, contrasting the trends during this period

Essay Plan:

• Introduction: refer to the 2 views and give my opinion – cultures will be destroyed if used as money-making tourist attractions
• Paragraph 2: globalisation destroys the ways of life and culture of many people e.g the survival of traditional music through commercial concerts/shows
• Paragraph 3:  commercialisation will not save traditional cultures (1) this culture loses its meaning e.g. traditional cooking (2) some cultures continue to be part of local life and can survive e.g. Carnival in Brazil
• Conclusion: when traditional culture relies on becoming money-making tourist attractions, it cannot be saved.  It is already dead.