Lời giải Đề thi IELTS 12/03/2022
Report:
The diagram illustrates the changes in the layout of a community centre 10 years ago compared to the present.
Overall, there were more offices in the building ten years ago, and today a cafe and coffee bar have been added to the facilities.
In the west of the community centre, an indoor sports area has today replaced the garden. However, the car park next to this area remains unchanged. In the middle of the diagrams, a coffee bar is now located next to the toilet, replacing the office that was there ten years ago. Above these, there is now a cafe area. This replaces storage space, and the office which was in the north of the plan ten years ago has now been divided by half, to provide a new storage area.
By contrast, some areas remain unchanged – the hall in the middle of the layout and, to the east of the diagram, the kitchen and storage space next to the kitchen. Finally, ten years ago, four small offices were located above the storage area in the east of the plan, and these have been combined into one large office today.
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Essay:
It is true that today many fewer people, especially young people, work on the land than in the past. While some reasons can be put forward to explain this trend, I firmly believe that it is necessary to attract many more young people into farming.
There is one major reason why fewer young people are now engaged in agriculture. Advances in technology have completely revolutionised how food is produced. The traditional methods, which were labour-intensive, have become obsolete . Sophisticated agricultural machinery has replaced people, in a process which has increased in intensity over the years. Young people are today rarely seen on farms. Lacking job prospects, they were among the first to join the mass exodus to the cities.
However, I would argue that more young people are needed in farming today. Firstly, modern methods of farming are increasing environmental degradation and provoking an ecological crisis. Farming techniques, for example organic growing, which are environmentally-friendly are the only sustainable way to produce food, and these techniques require much more human labour. Secondly, when young people migrate to cities, they often cannot find work and experience a sense of alienation. They live in a concrete jungle without a feeling of community that they had in their rural villages. Finally, to help to alleviate environmental problems in the countryside today, young people should be encouraged to study agronomy and ecology. Applying their knowledge to sustainable farming, young people will be mentally stimulated and physically fit.
In conclusion, the use of technology in modern industrialised agriculture puts profit before people, but more young people in farming will result in the application of technology to achieve sustainable development. This gives them a vital role in the future of humanity.
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Từ vựng
Vocabulary from technology:
- advances in technology
Meaning: the improvement or development in technology
Example: Recent advances in medical technology are making a great contribution to the search for a cure for Aids.
- to become obsolete
Meaning: to be no longer used because something new has been invented
Example: Technological innovation is now so rapid, that even the latest electronic devices soon become obsolete.
Vocabulary from work:
- labour-intensive
Meaning: (of work) needing a lot of people to do it
Example: New technology has replaced the need for workers to do many labour- intensive jobs, such as producing cars.
- job prospects
Meaning: the chances of being successful and having more opportunities at work
Example: People with qualifications and experience usually have the best job prospects.
Vocabulary from cities:
- a mass exodus
Meaning: the movement of a lot of people from a place
Example: Recently, there has been a mass exodus of people from to the cities.
- a sense of alienation
Meaning: the feeling that you have no connection with the people around you
Example: Unfortunately, urbanisation also creates a sense of alienation in people.
- a concrete jungle
Meaning: a way to describe a city that is unpleasant because it has many large modern buildings and few parks, trees or green spaces
Example: Children growing up in a concrete jungle will never experience the sights and smells of the countryside.
- a feeling of community
Meaning: the feeling of sharing things and belonging to a group in the place where you live
Example: Cities can be very lonely places, where a feeling of community does not exist and people do not even know their neighbours.
Vocabulary from the environment:
- environmental degradation
Meaning: the process or fact of the environment becoming worse
Example: Africa is a continent in which environmental degradation is evident in the spread of deserts and the extinction of animal species.
- an ecological crisis
Meaning: a serious situation that occurs when the environment of a species or a population changes in a way that destabilizes its continued survival
Example: Environmental degradation caused by human activity is provoking an ecological crisis which threatens our existence.
- environmentally friendly
Meaning: behavior or products that do not harm the environment
Example: We can help to protect the environment by using detergents and cosmetics that are environmentally friendly.
- to alleviate environmental problems
Meaning: to make bad environmental problems less severe
Example: Everyone can assist in the effort to alleviate environmental problems in the local community through simple actions such as recycling waste or planting a tree in their garden.
- to achieve sustainable development
Meaning: economic development that is achieved without depleting natural resources
Example: Organic methods must be introduced everywhere in order to achieve sustainable development in agriculture.
Other vocabulary:
- firmly [adverb]:
Meaning: in a strong or definite way
Example: When the boy did not do his homework, his teacher spoke firmly to him about the importance of homework.
- to revolutionise [verb]:
Meaning: to complete change the way of doing things
Example: New advances in medical science have revolutionised the treatment of many cancers.
- sophisticated [adjective]:
Meaning: clever and advanced (in the context of machinery)
Example: She upgrades her i-phone each time that a new, more sophisticated model is on the market.